Srijoni Bardhan
6. Lack of weight to the characters’ aspirations
It has become a common trope in movies where the protagonists have to abandon dreams that they have worked their entire lives for the sake of love. It might be career goals, or something that they have believed all their lives, but it doesn’t change the jarring change of character in the climax of the movie where they are ready to drop everything for apparently the only thing that matters. If the characters have to stop being themselves by the end of a romantic movie, the characters have never been written well enough. If their dreams were never strong enough, they were just a façade in the pretence of real character building. The conflict that arises from the differences in characters are not taken seriously and are dumped by the time of reconciliation.
Example: What Happens in Vegas, The Proposal
5. Undiscovered characters
It seems like the movies have their characters all figured out. Be it the brooding bad guy with the heart of gold, the awkward girl who believes she’s too ugly for love, or the hard-workers who just don’t have the time for love, they all usually come with a tragic backstory that defines them. Tropes are the cheat codes for character building, and Hollywood seems to be comfortable not discovering their characters beyond them. Their characters are a by-product of their pasts, and what they actually are is left unexplored. If you take the sad backstories away, who would they be? What do they like? What makes them happy? What kind of choices would they make if they were in an adversity? What kind of books would they love? Do they doodle when they are stressed or do they pick at their nails? Most of these are things that may or may not translate to the screen, but a writer should be knowing tonnes more about their character than what shows up on screen, and even if it is not blatant, you can see a great difference in them.
Example: Frankie and Johnny, Pretty Woman, Crazy Stupid Love, Twilight
4. Art direction
Lazy art-direction is a direct by-product of undiscovered characters. Sure, romance movies have beautiful locations, and are visually stunning, but just shifting the story to an exotic location is not the answer we are looking for. Most of the times its generic places like cute bookstores, cute cafes, classic music stores, or the countryside maybe? That’s all fine, but when we close down on the main characters in their personal space, we are looking for clues to complete the character. The females have generic cute and girly things, or a random blanket thrown on the sofa in the name of clumsiness, or a classy futuristic setting for a successful woman. Maybe throw in an old family photo for the other to start a conversation over. The design of the locations look overused, and there are hardly any means to separate one character from the other. Art direction is a way to tell more about the characters than that which can be shown through the script. Maybe the character likes to collect tea leaves, maybe they hoard polythene bags in another polythene bag, maybe they use empty honey jars to store spices or herbs. A carefully planned setting is not explicit, but speaks volumes about a person, but a generic template for locations that seem too impersonal takes away a lot of the feel from the movies.
Example: Almost all films
3. Too much logic
Hollywood loves to explain the logic behind all of their conclusions. It works for complex plots for Nolan, but romance movies are no rocket science. We don’t need characters to start explaining how or why they are what they are, or what they feel. The romance movies are too verbal, and we often see the characters talking about their feelings like a summer assignment. People do like this, perhaps, but too much explanation takes the magic of the moments away. Maybe Hollywood could let the characters feel for once instead for chasing after explanations.
Example: Almost all films
2. Cinematography
Hollywood does not particularly love to tread into more creative ways of filming love stories. In films about emotions and feelings, there are hardly any close-ups of the expressions, or the eyes, or small quirks that add to the body language of a character. Mid-shots are almost usually as far as the camera goes, and they do not bring us close to the character enough to feel the way they do. There is a sense of detachment of the audience from the characters, which should never be the case with romantic movies. There are hundreds of ways to only use the camera to make the entire story without the actors even needing to be in the face with their acting. Most of Wong Kar-Wai’s movies use the camera beautifully to tell stories where there is hardly any dialogue. Amélie is another example of the cinematography as an important element in the filming with high-angle choker shots and close-ups.
Example: Almost all films
1. Too much plot
We all watch movies for their plot, the vents, expositions, et cetera, et cetera. Except romantic movies. We don’t watch them for their intricate plots with mindboggling events. We watch romance movies for the way the two characters develop a relationship. Hollywood adds way too many events that move the story of the characters forward, so much so that the eventual realisation looks forced. In romance movies, the fundamental requirement is for the characters to drive the story, not the story to drive the characters forward. Stripped to the basic core, the plot of romance movies is that the characters meet. The best of romance movies work with this basic plot. Be it Before Sunrise, or Chungking Express, the Woody Allen movies, and even Eternal Sunshine of the Spotless Mind where the characters drive the complex plot themselves. We have plots that build through situations where the characters are forced to go along, maybe there were bets, or exes to make the other jealous, or friends who push them to be together. If you take external factors that bring them together out of the relationship will they still be together? We need the movies to shift from a macro environment to a micro one, focusing a lot more on the depth of characters and the beauty of the relationship than on the set up.
Example: Almost all films
